1. Title: one side ... ... ... ...
children while writing: the side off his clothes, while trousers.
teacher comment is: he in the end to off or to wear ah?
2. Title: One
children to write: I am one of an injured left foot.
teacher comment is: Are you a centipede it?
3. Title: The children will continually
wrote: work,
mbt shoes sale, my father's home land after another.
teacher comment is: in the end you have a few father ah?
4. Title: sad
children to write: in front of my house there articles ditches sad.
teacher comment is: the teacher is more sad.
5. Title: it has
children to write: my mother short and tall, fat and thin.
teacher comment is; your mother is a deformation of magic it?
6. Title: You see
children to write: Do you see what look! Ah
teacher comment is not seen: never seen
7. Title: thriving
children write: thriving Wing confession.
teacher comment is: Do not read too much drama!
8. Title: delicious
children write: delicious ass.
teacher comment is: Some things can not eat.
9. Title: naive
children write: really hot today.
teacher comment is: You're naive.
10. Topic: really
children write: Yesterday,
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teacher comment is: is the phrase, not separate.
11. Title: The first ... ... further ... ..., example: eat first,
mbt chapa, then ablution.
children wrote: Sir,
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teacher comment is: imagination more than the Earth's wisdom.
12. Title: What
children to write: a train through,
alexander mcqueen shoes 2010, What What What What What is the status
teacher comment is: I just die
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